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#1 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 12:42 AM

As you all know, i'm pretty, YES pretty new here.xDthis is my first shonen manga, i used tablet, and photoshop for toning.This is about a guy name Rin, who sucks at everything, was actually hired to be a swordsman.Please support my manga at http://faint.smackjeeves.com tooPosted ImageC&C highly appriciatedEDITED. Thanks for noticing.lol couldnt knew that this forum requires maximum size images.x.x

#2 little_farrie

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 12:28 PM

its too big D:
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#3 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 04:43 PM

Posted ImageAnother update!*searching for more screentoning patterns*EDIT:Posted ImageYES ! The cover~!XDi took 2 hours to finish this.>_>

#4 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 17 March 2009 - 12:59 AM

Posted Imagegarh i hate toning~!!D:sorry for lack of bg>_>"" im too lazy to draw those desks.

#5 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 20 March 2009 - 04:20 PM

UPDATE :Posted Image>3 new char appeared.~

#6 little_farrie

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Posted 21 March 2009 - 08:37 PM

me likey the story so far~~ i dunno why~I love your screen tones!you dont seem to draw your manga properly(noting the thickness of the lines changed from the previous page to your latest page and he has 4 fingers in the last 3rd box!)and (i hope you dont mind) it's "was she looking at me just now" not "is she looking at me just now".Anyways, i hope to see more of your manga! :3
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#7 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 21 March 2009 - 08:54 PM

^ LoL about the fingers part,sometimes when you do that post,you cant see your thumb, and it looks much better this way. :D The thickness of the lines,i keep changing,since i wanna see which lines is the best to fit that manga.:DDYeah,i suck at english grammars, =o= and i dont wanna care about the grammars.xDDont expect pretty good grammar from a little girl. LOL

#8 GrotesqueParody

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Posted 21 March 2009 - 10:41 PM

Uiii~ Nak menyebuk Sikit Kat Sini ~"A guy who actually sucks at everything, was hired to be a swordsman?!"That line is what caught my eyes, Cant wait to see how the story develops, New Character ~Well There are flaws here and there ,You know like the hands, fingers, Example , the cover, the hands are a little small, BUT Practice makes perfect ler! Takder yang lahir jek perfect betul tak ??English .. Grammar is quite important ler .. because sometimes a slight mistake in grammar would disturb the scene's feel, And we do want people to remember our work for its story and not its grammatical error kan ? Betul Tak ?Anyways! Bagus Bagus , teruskan usaha! >3
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#9 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 22 March 2009 - 09:46 PM

Posted Imagei dont know why i always suck at english.=/When it comes to translating or writing scripts for manga for something ;_;Hands,yeah i know.Its actually my weakest part.xDand i realize the difference between malaysians and westerns.=/seriously.

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Posted 22 March 2009 - 09:53 PM

I suxex Big Time In Geografi And Now I am working For tourism Malaysia ..Langsung takder kena mengenanya ayat aku tadi .dengan topik nie ..Slowly Slowly lor~when I first drew , my characters were hand-less and fingerless.. Then one day Suddenly sat down and sketched , Tetiba Buleh ler plak , Slowly , Asalkan lebih dari Aku , langsung tak nak mencuba .. Akhirnyer .. cuba jugak ..
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Posted 23 March 2009 - 08:30 AM

you are much better than me, i have never wanna try to drawbtw, the paneling in the 2nd pic above, Rin(crampling paper) should move it a bit to the right. as its current position, the left 3 panels wont show much thing. mm....ya, improvements in fingers too. just my opinion only. paiseh.looking forward into it. i am interested in the stories. i always love student + sword ^^

#12 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 27 March 2009 - 08:50 PM

lol im unexperienced in drawing.xD im a 13 years old girl,dont depend anything good on me .O_o i'll try to practice though :)

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Posted 27 March 2009 - 10:24 PM

13 years old only can draw so good, when i was 13, i was still 13 i can only draw doraemon >_

#14 GrotesqueParody

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Posted 27 March 2009 - 11:14 PM

Ler umur 13 dah leh lukis doraemon ... Aku .. Umur 13 .. tonton doraemon jek.. huhuhu sedihnyer ..
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#15 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 04 April 2009 - 07:17 PM

Posted ImageAnother update after two weeks ;_;....I'm sorry about the fingering part again >_>

#16 ShioriAkiba

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Posted 06 June 2009 - 08:18 PM

Posted ImagePosted ImageSorry for the long update D: D:! check out at smackjeeves, normally it updates faster than here D:*since connection isnt good lately, can barely upload into imageshack*

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Posted 30 August 2009 - 12:00 AM

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