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#1 Umina.Bisu

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Posted 27 February 2009 - 01:08 AM

ermm... mind asking? what kind of C&C you wish to know? The perspective? character? Background? etc...? sorry... i'm new too :)

#2 Taigurl

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Posted 27 February 2009 - 12:10 AM

First time posting my drawing ... *nervous nervous*Haven't been drawing for quite a long time cause busy with school , might be having lots of mistakes and stuff so pls guide me yeah~? :D Somehow i don't even know how to put my images in DA.. :cry: ..and i don't even know how to put them here ... :oops: [spoiler=]http://nicolenic.dev...works-114188540http://nicolenic.dev...ork-2-114188666[/spoiler]Comments & Critics are always welcomed~ :)

#3 RickyDemon

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Posted 27 February 2009 - 11:10 PM

i find everything's okay 8D just that the hair needs some work, and the girl's right arm anatomy maybe? XD;; practice more on clothe foldings too 8D XD i'm not a pro here so i can't help you much XD;; sorry orz;; *dies*

#4 Fishie-chan

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Posted 03 March 2009 - 12:54 PM

I like the 2nd wan better (the girl). I agree with RickyDemon bout the hair. i think u needed to add more hair or sth like that. U shld try putting in sum shades. It will look more alive that way^^

#5 Taigurl

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Posted 07 March 2009 - 08:44 PM

Umina.Bisu>>erm anything u like to say about?up to u^^RickyDemon>>eek im really bad at drawing hands...XD...thx for telling me ya~Fishie-chan>>I actually just started trying shading my pics recently...really bad at it ...>.<

#6 Fishie-chan

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Posted 09 March 2009 - 12:23 PM

Aww... U juz gotta practise more and more^^ If you dun relli knw how to shade, try research. It helps a lot. Look thru other pro's artwork and then get a start from there^^ Good luck!

#7 yensheng

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Posted 23 March 2009 - 08:57 AM

comment : shading makes drawing looks alive and have more impact. critic : btw, the shoulder of 1st drawing? the eyes, espeacially in 2nd drawing, make it more tonish and reflective a bit, unless you wanna make it looks like she is not alive(android maybe?), or being hynotised. the forebone below the neck of 1st drawing doesnt look rightcompliment : the drawing does bring out the emotion that you wanna show us. nicely donejust me thoughts ^^

#8 Taigurl

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Posted 23 March 2009 - 10:04 PM

Fishie-chan >> thx for the telling me :D yensheng >>the shoulder?could it be a bit too sharp ?just my thought... :) actually the girl i wanna portray it abit to the cool-ish n quiet type ... but i guess i still need lots of improvement here's 2 more that i drew , just simple sketches[spoiler=]http://nicolenic.dev...Bored-114188619http://nicolenic.dev...ork-3-114188690[/spoiler]