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VSP's Works In Progress in Need of Critique


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#1 arju-naa

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Posted 08 September 2011 - 04:35 PM

I'll be posting all my WIPs here for any critique and feedback before I, you know, finalize them.And here's my first:[spoiler=Please forgive the lack of clothes. XD;]Posted Image[/spoiler]Now what's the problem? I don't know. Somehow the pose seems too unnatural. What do you guys think? Anything I can do to improve on this?

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