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#1 AzuriteCat

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Posted 11 August 2012 - 02:41 PM

Is there anything I can do to improve/ spice up my artwork? I feel that it's missing something but I can't quite put my finger on it... =="

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-UPDATED!-
Okay....I tried applying your advices and this is the result~~




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Actually.....I drew this for the Halloween contest ^^
So.....is it better than the previous one? oWo Any comments??



For more of my artworks ----> http://azuritecat.de...rt.com/gallery/

Your comments are very much appreciated :)

#2 Revgadon

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 01:00 AM

No shadows/not enough shading? o:

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Metabee.. Use the medaforce!

Yeah yeaaaaaaah~!


#3 RavenMin

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 04:16 PM

This is great, but your anatomy are a bit wrong there, at the shoulders. don't worry, all you need is practice. ^^ Go and open any magazines, or even newspaper. Look at their anatomy i.e; if the hand is folded, the head angles, how the clothes are creased and try to draw back. I see that you have DA account? In DA, there's many human anatomy tutorial. If you do practice diligently, I'm sure you'll be great! ^^

Your colouring are great, but a bit monotone. Try to play around with colours ;)

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#4 RavenMin

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 04:18 PM

well, I can't say too much, 'cause all I can draw is from head to shoulder (bust) ^^''

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#5 AzuriteCat

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 05:16 PM

Thanks for the advices, folks! >3<

#6 RavenMin

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Posted 12 August 2012 - 09:02 PM

you're welcome! ^^

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#7 Choco

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Posted 06 October 2012 - 03:53 PM

Yiun Yee would like to say hai =D

SOoooo.... Hai.

#8 AzuriteCat

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Posted 06 October 2012 - 08:11 PM

Yiun Yee would like to say hai =D

SOoooo.... Hai.


HAAAIII~~ >A< >w< :D





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